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Spent the weekend downtown and was snapping photos everywhere, mostly heavy equipment. :lol: But took a couple I wanted to see what you guys thought. :D

Seattle Aquarium
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Seattle Cable Car Tracks
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I like number 2 over number 1, but to me, both are a bit grey... I would suggest increasing the contrast a bit to make them 'pop' a bit more...
 
I like #1, #2 I would have liked to see the foreground sharp, fading to bokeh along with the tracks, along with more tracks, maybe leading off picture.
 
the piano has the same problem as the railroad.
it's also overexposed, needs more contrast, sharpening and warmer light.
composition is another issue, keep shooting the piano in different angles and from different distances.
 
I like the keyboard shot the best! For the tracks I would suggest trying to get lower and more parallel to the tracks.

I was hoping I could, but a train was coming and I was pretty much laying on the tracks, it was a quick shot.
 

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