3 for C&C First time using a studio and model

[MissCream]

There is a very similar thread on here but basically I took a basic lighting workshop here are a few pictures I ended up with. I went home and bought a strobe kit and a backdrop... Expensive hobby.... The pictures aren't all that exciting but I only had a short period of time with the model. The instructor didnt look at any of the pictures we took so I would like some C&C from you guys!

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[LightSpeed]

Easily number 3. Looks good.

 

[ConverseMan]

Yup agree #3 for sure. I would just watch your white balance on #1 next time....but nice job. Good job at being creative and not the boring portrait poses.

 

[MissCream]

Thanks

I'm soooo bad with WB. I'm on a laptop too and it changes color from the top of my screen to the bottom so when I try to fix it, it's really hard to tell if I'm fixing it or making it worse...

 

[ConverseMan]

Is your laptop dying on you? It shouldn't be changing colors that drastically...

 

[MissCream]

Its not dying, its just a slight difference and its about 5 years old. I have replaced the screen and the new one is really crappy but it was all I could afford (I keep spending all my money on camera stuff...) The brightness changes from top to bottom as well, not fun for editing but I do the best I can with what I have!