A few more models from the other day...

[jlykins]

So here are a few more from the session I posted earlier...

This shot would have been better if the models hands were a little less masculine:

 

[red1013]

#1 is my fav

 

[SrBiscuit]

#1 is also my fave, but 2 things ill nitpick...
1. the piercing (is it called a marilyn or a madonna?) would look better if just the ball were exposed...having the post show makes it look like its sticking out (which i guess it is)
2. it looks like some lipstick is missing from her bottom lip, and i keep looking at the bare spot.

#2 the angle seems to make her look a bit long-waisted to me which in turn shortens her legs

#3 the only thing that kills this one for me is her hands...her nails are SO short it almost makes her hands look like husky boy hands (for lack of a better term)

i think the lighting on all of them is GREAT.
im not all that familiar with lighting and techniques, but is it ok to have the square catchlights? just curious.

nice shots overall jly

 

[bhphotography]

great lighting!