1 Figure at base of Frederich Shiller statue in Gendarmenmarkt 2 In a courtyard of a Berlin public library 3 Next 3 shots taken at Deutsches Technikmuseum Berlin 4. Floor 5. Diving suit used for the construction of the Berlin Haupbahnhof (central train station)
5 really stands out to me. Maybe because I'm a diver myself. Maybe not. Looking at it analytically, The tones are nice. However, it looks to be slightly underexposed on the suit itself. Nice shot though. In number one i would like to see the statue a little bit closer to centered in the composition. Other than that, outstanding. :thumbsup:
I agree with your comments on both photo's. So I edited them. So nice to have objective criticism. Thank you
Do we now see the edited version? For try as I might, I don't SEE the underexposure on the diver's suit ... if it is still there, can anyone point me to it? I do admit I got a very bright screen here ... I really like the shadows and the pattern on that wooden floor that you captured, Remi, and OF COURSE I like the grown-over ... erm ... thing there, of which I just now don't know the word ... maybe scoop? (Had to look that one up). So the detail of the Schiller-statue on Gendarmenmarkt is not the very Herr Schiller himself, but just someone? I like that you picked out the "just someone" for your close-up then. Honours him - while most would focus on Herr Schiller himself. I like that.
