a few shots, need feedback!

[Tom3]

This first shot was taken with a Nikon D70 in Venice, Italy. I had to crop some garbage on the left.

This next one was taken with an Olympus SP-500UZ, in a hotel room. We saw a picture of Audrey Hepburn with the same pose and decided to copy it.
I turned the picture to B&W, make the brightness in a S curve and then fixed a few things here and there in Photoshop.

The following one was done using the same principle, same camera and same hotel room

And the last one was done in Malibu, but I haven't had the chance to touch it up yet.

I'm learning, so don't hesitate to speak your mind

 

[Sulfur]

I like the 2nd one, but I wish her teeth weren't the brightest part of the picture.
Also, you probably know but #3 is really soft.

 

[ANDS!]

I'm going to go out on a limb and say the out of focus #3 is a stylistic choice as the entire photo is OOF. I think it works. Might work better if that shadow wasn't there and that cig was hotter, but still pretty sexy photo.

#2 would work better for me if you cropped that from the bottom quite a bit more; it looks like shes got a really long neck and a tighter crop might frame it a bit more intimately. Otherwise, you could probably print that out nice and big and hang it for your viewing pleasure.

 

[Tom3]

#3 was definitely out of focus on purpose; in fact the blur was done in Photoshop.

for #2, I'll touch up the teeth (darken them a bit) and crop the neck and republish.