A few shots of the missus

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Lucky Man, pic 1 is a bit underexposed though.

John.
 
C&C per req:

1. LOSE the plastic drink cup! The shadows are a little deeper than I would consider ideal, but I think with some careful work in Lightroom you could tweak things nicely. I would also suggest leveling the horizon.

2. Nicely done monochrome, and I really like the happy, serene expression, but the cluttered background kills it.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John
 
Yeah, the iced cappuccino is kind of a drag in the first one, as it's a nice photo otherwise. Might have benefited from a fill flash at -2ish FEC.
 
Appreciate the feedback everyone.

Yes i agree; the cup was so frustrating !! haha. I was too focused on trying to get the perfect sunset lighting that i forgot about all else.

That aside, i also see what you mean by the clustered background in pic #2. I guess composition plays a large role and it was rather neglected this time round. I'll keep this in mind, thanks guys!
 

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