A little series

[Artoo]

Comments welcome

 

[sthvtsh]

I like the middle. =)

 

[dgs]

Man, I wish I had such a lovely and willing model.

The lighting needs work, I think. Seems flat to me. The third pic would be really good if her face was nicely lit.

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[Garbz]

Poor thing likes like she has a curved spine. I know exactly how that feels :'(

One thing I like is the captured moods in the photos. I don't like how they are all different. In the first one she looks sad and the second gives me the same kind of feeling, but by itself it could mean a variety of things. Sticking with that theme the third photo looks a little out of place.

 

[oldnavy170]

I like the middle. =)

I was thinking the same thing. I think its her boney back that gives this photo something special.

 

[Chinaloach]

middle is the best

 

[Ab$olut]

I like them all you seem'd of nailed hand position aswell :hail:

 

[Artoo]

Thanks for the input all

 

[LaFoto]

I think I would personally like the last best (standing on its own) if her face was lighter. It is nicely lit in the first and I would wish for the same in that last one.

The fact that her skoliosis is so obvious seems to give away too much about her (in my mind) ... which is why I am not so fond of the second. It's as if we are entrusted with a medical detail that is not for all to know (just feelings on my side, personal ones, no critique, never get me wrong here, please!)

 

[Artoo]

Don't worry Nothing taken wrong here... Opinion appreciated

 

[markc]

The lighting could be more interesting, but as far as these go as taken, I see three things: JPG compression is too high, as I see artifacts; the white point could be brought down in levels which would boost the contrast (which could be further adjusted in curves); and you have a custom ICC profile embedded in the JPG. All JPGs should be saved with sRGB as the color space, otherwise they will look funny when displayed by a browser.

Mind if I post an edit?

 

[Artoo]

I ya feel like it :thumbup:

 

[markc]

 

[Artoo]

Ok, point taken, m8. Still, I guess it's a matter of taste. I was aiming away from the look you prefer. I don't like how the white sheets seem to blend with the highlight in the background (which seems less of a problem in the original). That and I simply wanted to try a look more towards the low key end

As for the colour profile. I checked and my pshop sais it's sRGB :/

Still, thanks for taking the time to comment

 

[markc]

gotchya.
Mine said it was undefined ICC when I loaded, so don't know what happened there.