Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by bishopsmead, Apr 13, 2005.
What do you think of this?
Adam, I see you are going for becoming a second D.Bishop I like it because it is original but do you have one in color?
I like the idea. Nothing really catches my eye. Point of focus is a little vague. A bump in contrast may help too.
A little change in lighting may help by bringing out some texture.
haha...i can easily imagine them having a conference. i like it.
I'm probably asking for trouble - but I was inspired by the shapes in this photo by Michael Kenna:
I'm a b&w guy, but I like the color version.
Looking at your inspiration for it, you'll notice that the lighting is coming from the right side. I think that would also work for your image too.
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