This is a tough one for me. You've definitely made it interesting for me by choosing the framing, and although I wouldn't have thought I would like it, it works for me. The exposure feels a bit off to me though and because of that, it doesn't have the "mood" that I feel like it should have.
I'm going to have to look at this a little longer...
I cant believe i am critiquing somebody else's photograph as mine are terrible- but nevertheless-
I think it'd look really sweet if it were slightly darker and the colors were more rich. I realize there isn't really any colors, but i hope you know what i mean.