Abstract

[Scarlett_Phoenix]

I thought I would post this here and see what you guys think.My first Abstract piece (I am having loads of firsts this week )

 

[Scarlett_Phoenix]

And incase anyone wonders what it is......................well, I will let you guess a bit first.

 

[Scarlett_Phoenix]

*Bump*

 

[yummifruitbat]

Very cool ... think it's the fruit-peel-grating bit of a grater or the spiky bit of a steak tenderiser. Reasonable guesses?

 

[jadin]

The chrome step to a truck of some-sort?

It looks a little flat, try adding a smidge of contrast to bolden it up.

 

[Scarlett_Phoenix]

Very cool ... think it's the fruit-peel-grating bit of a grater or the spiky bit of a steak tenderiser. Reasonable guesses?

Yay, you guessed correctly. it is indeed a steak tenderiser. :thumbup:

 

[Scarlett_Phoenix]

Is this any better? Or not enough?

 

[jadin]

Yes, definately looks better.

For me, I try to add as much as I can until it's too much, then add a little more. No, I kid, I back off a little. Under the assumption, it's hard to add too much.

Regardless the new version definately looks good.

 

[Scarlett_Phoenix]

Thank you, it helps to get the views of others, expecially if it help bring on improvments. :thumbup:

 

[Verbal]

I said it on DA but I'll say it here too...this is a great first! Wonderful shot Kim.

 

[Scarlett_Phoenix]

I said it on DA but I'll say it here too...this is a great first! Wonderful shot Kim.

I thought I would post it in both places..........you can never get too much feedback.

 

[Verbal]

I thought I would post it in both places..........you can never get too much feedback.

Darn tootin'!

 

[yummifruitbat]

Hehehe I win!! 8)

Agreeing about the second, definitely an improvement :thumbup: