Age of innocence?

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OK, so 2 questions here.

1. Which text placement works best?
2. Which exposure settings work best?

a.
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c.
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Thanks for the help. :)
 
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These are great. i like the wording above her head in c. and i like the exposure best in b. The exposure in b is the most realistic and emotionally dark. Great job.
 

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I like C but in all cases I would use a differnet font. Something deconstructed or at least that had more weight to it. Like the contrast of the red with the black and white.
 
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Thanks for the comments guys.

Tried using a kid's handwriting for text to try and portray the concept a little better. Any comments greatly welcome.

Better, Worse?

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Looks good but crop the top, my eye keeps going up to the light area.
 

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