Amy

[NoelNTexas]

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[wildmaven]

My thoughts:
1. There is a strange shadow on her abdomen that makes it look like she's grown a round tumor.
3. Can you edit out the tan line? For some reason, I'm missing seeing her legs, almost like she sunk down into a hole or something... Probably because she is so thin, the leg bumps under the dress are hardly there.
2, 4, 5, and 7 could sure use a shorter DOF, in my opinion. That would make her really pop.
6. Great capture. Too bad her breasts look all poochy.
8. This is my least favorite. The position just looks so uncomfortable, not natural, and her tummy looks fat. Eek! This pose does nothing for her, as she has large upper arms and almost no lower leg definition.
5. She looks like she hates you, ha ha! What an expression!

Does she have bad teeth? She's such a beautiful girl, I would love to see one with her smiling!

I think my favorite one is 5, except for the expression. You might want to lighten her armpit a bit, it looks a bit "5 o'clock shadowy".

 

[Garbz]

I really like number 3, but I agree it wouldn't hurt to ask her to "say cheese"