An Umbrella and A Semester in Branson

[jcamp1991]

A couple of my early shots with the nifty fifty. Also, shooting in black and white on the camera, was taking a film class at the time and caught the bug. Let me hear your thoughts.

One

An Umbrella and A Semester in Branson by TheLouisianaJackhammer, on Flickr

Two

An Umbrella and A Semester in Branson by TheLouisianaJackhammer, on Flickr

Three

An Umbrella and A Semester in Branson by TheLouisianaJackhammer, on Flickr

Four

An Umbrella and A Semester in Branson by TheLouisianaJackhammer, on Flickr

I'm blogging about my work at The Ol' College Try if you're interested in the images.

 

[ScubaDude]

I like #1 and #2. Interesting and unique perspective and framing. #3 hurts my eyes. #4 looks like you hit the shutter button as you were falling... maybe a wider crop would give it that same something that #1 and #2 have.

 

[David A Sercel]

To me, number two is the strongest--but I would like a little more breathing room between the model and the right edge. 3 and 4 aren't working for me.