...and her doll

#1

#2


here's mom:
#3


dof could be a little less shallow, other than that, any comments?

 

My only comment is my how she grew from the first to the last shots..

 

well, if you'd care to glance above the last shot, you'll see, "Here's mom:".

 

I really like the one of Mom, but agree a little more DOF might improve it. The pose in #2 is very sweet. Overall the images appears a bit underexposed and the tones are pretty flat. Did you covert these to b/w? What kind of lighting did you have to work with?

 

sorry i really didn't notice but I did figure as much...

 

converted, yes. d70s. lighting was from an incandescent chandielier (sp?) above.
tones could probably use more saturation or contrast, i guess, but i think they turned out alright.

 

I think they all could use a boost in contrast.