I think you'd like it better if you had managed to keep the top plane within the frame. It doesn't matter too much that the bottom one is cropped in half, but to me it feels that it does matter with the top one.
But don't ever trash a picture.
Try cropping it one way or the other and see what you can come up with.
For overall this is quite interesting and a sort of picture that I, at least, don't see every day!