Another B/W attempt

[Photoboy]

I'm working on enhancing my B/W conversions of color photos. What do you think of this one?

Thanks!

 

[Tonks]

Again, with the eyes closed. It's just strange. I commented on the other shot you posted of this couple, and my comments about the pose goes for this one as well.

Her hair looks a bit better in this one- some of the lighting on her hair is a little harsh, but brunettes are so difficult to photograph.

I also think I'd like this one a bit better if it were cropped so that I couldn't see her arm/body on the left.

 

[JonMikal]

still don't like the eyes closed

 

[Sash[DSL]]

I wouldnt agree with others I DEFINITELY like the eyes closed. This gives it a very dreamy feel, you could work it further that way if you added a soft focus and slightly higher contrast