Another new idea....(another newborn photo)

[JenLavazza]

Okay, sorry for so many posts, but I'm editing a newborn session and am trying out some new ideas, so I'm looking for feedback.

I don't normally add text to my photos, but here goes...

From the Nursery Rhyme "Monday's Child". He was born last Thursday.

 

[robertwsimpson]

you forgot the apostrophe in Thursday's

 

[reznap]

I don't know how I feel about the text but I'll give you credit for trying new things. Also good job not horribly blowing out the white fur - I probably would have.

If I try to see past the label and the text, I really like the composition. Looks good!

 

[JenLavazza]

Oops, I meant to go back and fix that. That font gave me a huge box when I put in the apostrophe...?? Thanks for pointing that out!

 

[Designsbyjessie]

I actually love how you did the text. for something like that i would think it would be great for the picture i want to send to grandma or have on my desk!