Any thoughts?

[cartman]

I shot this at a construction site not far from my house. I would like to know what you think.

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[cartman]

 

[Alpha]

It's not sharp enough. Looks out of focus.

 

[Holy Ghosted]

the way the lines are and the focus makes my eyes jump around like it is supposed to be a illusion trick but nothing is happing yet I think it is neat. I don't know if it would do the same in print.

 

[abraxas]

It's, sort of engaging. I've been sitting here staring at it with my mouth kind of hanging a little open for awhile, so, it's interesting.

Nice lines through it. Maybe push the colors to abstract it a bit more.

 

[cartman]

Abaraxas thanx. I kinda thought it had an abstract feel to it.
Maxbloom it is a foto of a tyre tread with a kit lens. I would have liked it to be sharper myself.
Holy Ghosted that is what I like about it, the eyes have nothing to focus on exept the entire picture.

 

[matt3756]

try and sharpen it a bit. it's a very interesting concept.