At the park

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Taken at our local park.



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thank you rachelsne. I like the second one as well. Any other creative crit?
 

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I think the girl in #2 looks sad and lonely. Though sometimes with our captures we get the wrong mood. Was she sad?
 
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she was sad, her little friend had run off to play with someone else. she looked so alone in a park full of kids on a sunny day. Thanks for the comments
 

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#2 is the best of this group, IMO #1 the composition is wrong, I like to see at less part of subject’s face
 
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Roger----Thanks. I wondered if b&w was a good choice...glad I went with it.
Jeff----I was unsure about number 1 myself. I liked the angle but was unsure since it was a back shot.
 

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#2 great capture!
 

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