B&W City Birds.. And a Door

CalebPhotographer

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Why is it that I always have to bump to get any feedback?

...rhetorical
 
I'm sorry caleb but these pictures have some compositional issues. With the first two the composition makes me feel like the shot was not thought through well. In the first one, the bird on the left has his wing cutoff, and I feel that is subtracting from the shot. Something to practice for next time would be to make sure the whole subject is in the shot (i.e. in this shot move the camera to the left). In the second, the bird is the main focus, but I feel would be to it's advantage if it was on a third (one of the two thirds on the right), and I would possibly would have tried to blur the background more with a bigger apterature. The third one is my favorite as the point of intrest lies on a third and the shot itself is sharp as a tack.
 
The door pic is my favorite.

I like what you were trying to do in the bird photos. Your almost there though, just follow advice above, I'm sure you'll get a good one.
 

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