B&W of my daughter

[clbryant19811]

My daughter is already tired of being my model so I have to sneak pics of her sometimes. I snapped this one quick, but she caught me before I could reposition and get her standing to the right of the frame instead of the left, but it turned out ok.

 

[KevinPutman]

I think the contrast might need a bit of an adjustment,
mostly on the trees,
but that may just be my personal taste.

 

[Josh66]

I think it would be better if you put her on the right side of the frame. (Like you mentioned.)

How it is now, everything is taking you out of the frame. The direction she's looking, the angle of the ground - it all leads your eye right out of the photo.