I feel that it's a little too gray for my taste... Notice it doesn't have much black or white which makes it kind of dull looking. I did a quick little edit in Photoshop of how I'd have personally edited it if it were mine...
Thank you for the feedback..Last time I posted a picture (color) I had too much contrast, so I guess I held back on it and was too careful. I'll keep trying!! It does look better with more contrast.
I'm with Bossy on this one... I like the original best. The lack of contrast makes me think of this photo as being a memory of a girl if that makes sense.