Baby Portrait c&c :)

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Hi Guys,

I thought i would do a little portraiture shot of my newphew he's a tornado of a kid but got a few good pics just wondering what all of your thoughts are :).
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First and most importantly. the WB seems wayyyyyyyy off. His skin is show as a bright orange/yellow on my calibrated monitor, and it appears taht you've either missed focus, or used too shallow a DoF as his mouth seems soft. I would also consider trying shoot a little wider to avoid cropping the little bit of his head off.
 
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First and most importantly. the WB seems wayyyyyyyy off. His skin is show as a bright orange/yellow on my calibrated monitor, and it appears taht you've either missed focus, or used too shallow a DoF as his mouth seems soft. I would also consider trying shoot a little wider to avoid cropping the little bit of his head off.

Agreed, on the white balance i believe it might have also been the filter i used in lightroom as well a soft and dreamy filter :/ i'll need to get it straightened out and post it back up :). The filter also highly affected his lips in there as well.
 

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Way oversaturated, way, way, way.
Don't clip the head, it looks like a mistake.

maybe color a bit like this?

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