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RobN185

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A couple of images from the backstreets of Central France.

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I like the area and the subjects...

...but... your exposure is way off. For me I'd like to see the women in both pictures clearly. but that doesn't happen because your exposure is sooo dark (you appear to have exposed for the sky)

Also think about how you want the image to look. Did you want a low key image? That's OK but then you want some light on the women... and you don't want a super bright sky in the background

Also, I'd say you need to look a little more into composition
 
Thanks for the input Vautrin, I think the exposure is pretty accurate for what I saw.
I was trying to capture a feel for the area, the women in relation to their surroundings was more important to me, than catching them as subjects.
But, if I am explaining this, then I got it wrong and it didn't work.
 
Yeah, not so good. The top one the woman disappears into the wall. 2nd one my eye goes to the building in back and I'm thinking the woman should get out of the way. :).
 
A couple of images from the backstreets of Central France.

Personally, I like the idea. I like the scenes. I liked the "subjects"

But I do agree, quite a bit underexposed.

I'm no pro by any means, just saying what I like & don't like.
 

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