Bat Mitzvah Girls (lots of pics)

[AprilRamone]

I'm really hoping to get some feedback on these photos. These two girls have to pick one individual and one of both of them together for their bat mitzvah coming up in June. I tried doing a Vignette for the first time. What do you guys think? Did I do it right? Does it work?
Oh I also wanted to ask about the one of them walking and holding hands. Do you guys think they're too old for that sort of shot?
Thanks,
April

 

[LittleMan]

Great photos! They really capture the girls' character. :thumbup:

 

[Iron Flatline]

Hands down, your three strongest shots fulfill the three requirements:

The second picture as the one with both of them in it - it's definitely a strong shot.

The fifth shot, the blondish girl with the necklace touching and looking at the blossoms.

The second-to-last of the darker-haired girl leaning against the fence.

Very good images, you should be very happy with them.

...and as a gift to them, maybe a small, tiled collage of all the images.