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For the second model...
I like the second picture of her the best. Nice expression, and the background adds interest.
Here are the critique points I see-
harsh shadows at hairline- needed more fill from her left side.
wardrobe issues- empire waist blouse makes her look pregnant. Unless she actually is- that is problematic. you could try cropping down to frame her face and some of the pier. this is an area where perhaps your sister can also double as a stylist.
strong light on face accentuates lines on forehead and other imperfections. you could smooth out some of the more obvious stuff.
something in the background is growing right out of the top of her head. a decent mask tool would correct this.
I like the second picture of her the best. Nice expression, and the background adds interest.
Here are the critique points I see-
harsh shadows at hairline- needed more fill from her left side.
wardrobe issues- empire waist blouse makes her look pregnant. Unless she actually is- that is problematic. you could try cropping down to frame her face and some of the pier. this is an area where perhaps your sister can also double as a stylist.
strong light on face accentuates lines on forehead and other imperfections. you could smooth out some of the more obvious stuff.
something in the background is growing right out of the top of her head. a decent mask tool would correct this.