Thank you for the critique everyone. The model is only 16, and she is amazingly talented. Since posting the few proofs, I have been contracted by her studio to shoot all of the senior class, and have been contacted for working with 2 other studios. Seems my take on this has gone over well.
I found the lighting in this hay loft quite challenging, as I only have one speedlight and softbox on me for the shoot. Focusing in the dark was horrible. I must add a flashlight or head light to my camera bag for these situations.
Most of this session was done with film - these were just a few of my digital captures.
Thanks again for the feedback, its always appreciated and I learn so much from it.
Cheers
Kristal