Beautiful Ukranian(3 for C&C)

[Foxx]

Went out to some train tracks near the city today with a friend from the Ukraine. Please critique!

#1

#2 -- Do you like this in b&w or color more?

#3

Thanks for looking

 

[radiorickm]

Here are some of my thoughts;
Overall these are pretty good. YOu did a good job.

If I were to NIT PICK, this is what I noticed

#1 the details in the hand seem to be blown out. Not too much detail on the upper part near the sleeve.
#2/3 I like both versions, but there are some posing issues I have, I'm not fond of how her hands are posed.
#4 I have a thing about eyes in the photo...She is dead center in the photo to begin with, and looking up, maybe away from the river. You could have given her some more space to look into.

Like I said, nit picks. Overall, pretty neat set.

 

[Foxx]

Thanks for the suggestions! Any more? PLease guys!

 

[Foxx]

no one else :/ I really need feedback or I can't improve...