Black and White Room

vipgraphx

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I would love to have feedback on this black and white photo. This was taken at De Grazia Studios Tucson AZ...



room with cross bw by VIPGraphX, on Flickr
 

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I think this works well.
Like the contrast and darkness, gives a nice feel to it.
The light on the floor is maybe a little close to the edge.

But a nice and well composed shot!
 

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Very nice. I wish the spread of light was more diagonally arranged, possibly an hour earlier or later the spot of light on the floor would have been a bit further to the right? Consider a more square crop? I'm not sure the edges, especially the right one, are contributing much after the tones get pulled down to the darkest levels. You want a bit of that, but I feel like some could be trimmed off usefully.

Minor quibbles, though. Lovely translucent shadows, good light. This is very nice.
 

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