Boat on a calm lake

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#1 the colors are dull and could use a bit more exposure. i'd also prefer it if the little bit of ground on the left and branch in the upper left weren't there.

#2 is underexposed by quite a bit.

and i think this should be someplace other than the pro gallery.
 
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Thanks for the input.....I'll try those in next sessions :D
Can the moderators please put those somewhere in those sections?
 
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Larissa, I acutally kept them as a part of the composition.......
 
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^ Yeap I agree with that too...technically if I'd taken the exposer from the boad I think that could be achieved.
 

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Composition, color and exposure are weak.
Needs more focus on the subject, I assume it is the boat. Colors are dull and lifeless.
The second photo is heading in the right direction, the first shot looks like something shot from a car as you were driving by.
 

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