Boyfriend & Girlfriend

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I am a high contrasty kinda guy on my work but here are a few of a couple that I did recently. :hugs:

Ofcourse I love comments, thats how you get better right?

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[goliath]

On the 1st, 4th and 5th picture, the skin of the women looks overexposed.

I would crop the 1st and 5th one closer to the couple and adjust horizon on the 5th.

Nice use of DOF.

 

[unnecessary]

On the 1st, 4th and 5th picture, the skin of the women looks overexposed.

I would crop the 1st and 5th one closer to the couple and adjust horizon on the 5th.

Nice use of DOF.

Ya when u shoot a dark complexion and lighter subject together, you may get that. But thats the style i was going for. Thank -=D

Any others?

 

[bigtwinky]

3 is my favorite one. Its a classic pose, but you did it well.
2 is also well done imo

I'm not keen on the face poses in 5. She looks like she is going to start to laugh and he is looking at the bench? If this is the intent, cool. If the shoot is about boyfriend girlfriend, I'd have him looking at her.

 

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3 is my favorite one. Its a classic pose, but you did it well.
2 is also well done imo

I'm not keen on the face poses in 5. She looks like she is going to start to laugh and he is looking at the bench? If this is the intent, cool. If the shoot is about boyfriend girlfriend, I'd have him looking at her.

Word! Ya that #5 was a "hitting on you" type shot. The way they describe their first time talking was similar.

 

[bigtwinky]

she really has that "get out of my face look". haha

 

[tasman]

The shots are ok, but I dont like the expressions on her face.

 

[jasonkt]

#4 is my favorite.

 

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The shots are ok, but I dont like the expressions on her face.

ya... shes a rookie -=D