LiveinColor
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Some of my first attempts at product photography. What do you guys think? I'd love some feedback.
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These are really nice! I agree with the guy above that the crops could be a little tighter.
I also think you were a little bit low on the shot with the two bottles. That would have worked much better with a wider lens so you had a bit of lens distortion and the bottles tapered upwards slightly, making the them appear bigger, taller and more superior (this could also be done in post if you don't have a wider lens) - as it is, I feel just slightly too low and it makes the viewing a little uncomfortable.
Other than that, though - they are really nicely lit and edited. This is good work
EDIT: Also, I just checkout your website. Really wonderful work! Your beauty shots are exquisite! I'm going to enjoy seeing more stuff from you!
Yep, I agree with the hero shot - that's what I meant - maybe I wasn't very clear in my reply! I meant if you were a bit lower with a wider lens, the hero shot would have come off better, as it stands it looks like you are unintentionally too lowThese are really nice! I agree with the guy above that the crops could be a little tighter.
I also think you were a little bit low on the shot with the two bottles. That would have worked much better with a wider lens so you had a bit of lens distortion and the bottles tapered upwards slightly, making the them appear bigger, taller and more superior (this could also be done in post if you don't have a wider lens) - as it is, I feel just slightly too low and it makes the viewing a little uncomfortable.
Other than that, though - they are really nicely lit and edited. This is good work
EDIT: Also, I just checkout your website. Really wonderful work! Your beauty shots are exquisite! I'm going to enjoy seeing more stuff from you!
Thank you! ^_^ I was going for a hero shot on the bottles. I did try some higher angles and I didn't like them as much. But I will definitely try a wider lense for that next time. I'll play with the distorting this one.
For the bottles, strip box right, scrim left and behind, and I cut out some cards and placed them an inch behind each bottle to bounce some light back in them. For the lipstick strip box right , and a v flat leftVery well done, IMHO.
what was the lighting setup?
Also, having seen the other photos from your class, I feel yours are the most vibrant and eye catching.