C&C needed, thanks!

AlexisSuzanneFotos

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I took this photo a couple of months back, but I'm not completely satisfied with the way it came out. C&C would be great, and feel free to edit it if you want to show a particular technique. I'll post one color and one in B&W. I'm a very new photographer, so if anyone has any advice, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks! :)

1.Color
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2.B&W

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dont like the composition on this one, there is too much space up top, which some is blown out and very white, which is distracting.

get in closer to your subject to fill the frame more with them or if you want them in the scenery that they are in, then find a more suitable background that will help and not hinder the image
 

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Looks out of focus, take it at a smaller aperture to blur the background and accentuate your subject.
No matter what you do to it the photo will never be a prize winner.
 

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