C&C on adelaide nighttime photo

[tons101]

Hi All
I'm a beginner photographer and as you can see this is my first post on TPF.
I'm just looking for some feedback on this shot from last night. I went out capturing and this was the best of the lot.
I've done some minor post processing in lightroom.

Thanks for your time
(ps. I am aware of the tilting problem. When i am back on my main computer at home i will fix it up.)

 

[tirediron]

Not bad; it looks like the exposure could have been a tad shorter as you've blown out a lot of the lights, but that's not a huge deal. I would suggest leveling it however.

 

[manaheim]

Pretty damned good.

 

[Heitz]

Yea this is great... But needs a few degrees rotation

 

[tons101]

Ive thought about the composition, do you think this would be better?

 

[thetrue]

I like the first better on the right side, but it's better with that red something-or-another on the left side cropped out.

 

[Frequency]

The first thing i felt was the last thing you mentioned, the tilt....you knew that and corrected that...what else?...everything perfect :thumbsup: