C&C pease on my portrait photography

[ramblingman]

The ones with the white background almost seem a bit over expossed to me ..... but ur on the right track for sure !

 

[LaFoto]

My daughter's IMMEDIATE comment on the one of the three children was: "Oh, that one's cute ... BUT he should have worn CLEAN socks!"
So there you had one who saw the dirty socks at once! Maybe that's something to watch for in the future?

As to the first: I feel that light wasn't on your side for that one. It so calls out for additional light sources. Her eyes are only black. And he seems to look just so slightly away from the camera. Plus I do miss the tops of their heads!

 

[indioli]

Thank you all so much... What do you think of these?...
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[jgooz]

cant really say anything that hasnt been said, although i like the photos, the crops are what probably bugs me the most, and the last 4 you posted are better imo except i have this thing with sunglasses. either they all have em on or none of them.