Can I get some C&C on these please?

[abnormalreply]

What do you guys think?

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This is actually the first time I tried artificial DOF in PP, as you can probably tell.

 

[abnormalreply]

Bump =\

 

[misstwinklytoes]

1. The people ruin the shot for me, oddly enough. I think it'd be great if they weren't there. The two bright blue objects (pants and shirt) stick out too much for me.

2. Moon is too high, I'd go ahead and crop it down off the top and left and focus on the bottom right of the image.

3. You left some sharp spots that should be blurry. On the left of the guy on the right just above the benchand it looks like under the bench and to the left of the guys nose on the left. The fake PP really kinda just hurts my eyes. I think I'd rather just see it all in focus.

 

[Leilameat]

I like the people in the shot! But you can see where you missed some spots.

 

[PerfectlyFlawed]

I agree with pretty much most of this. The shots are over blown, and the people kind of ruin the shot. I also think the moon should be cropped out , its just not helping that picture... perhaps if it were down lower( but its not )