Can you find the subject?

[darin3200]

First, the B&W conversion doesn't look good. It's very flat. Increase the whites and do some stuff with levels and curves.

Second, if you want to focus on the couple more just do some vignetting to direct the viewer's eyes to the center

 

[D-50]

I agree with Darin, the whole scene is in focus so is the viewers decision to decide what to look at, although the couple in the middle seems to be the subject it does not stand out, i would say next time try an f stop of 3 or so keep everything out of focus execpt the coulple.

 

[Jovian]

My best advice would be not to worry quite so much about capturing all the action in one shot. You can focus in on the details a little bit more, and not stress about it as much.

Just my .02 though...