Car Dealership HDR C&C

robertwsimpson

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I was asked to take photos that showed the inside and outside of these buildings, which I think I've done. I'm just not quite happy with how they came out. Any C&C?


Both Showrooms at Sunrise by robertwsimpson, on Flickr

Main Showroom at Sunrise by robertwsimpson, on Flickr

Used Car Showroom at sunrise by robertwsimpson, on Flickr

each one is 3 exposures combined in photoshop, then edited. Slight correction for keystoning applied as well as tons of color correcting for different white balances, etc. contrast and brightness and dodging/burning also applied.
 
The sky is blown out. If you could dial down the brightness in the skies it would be a huge improvement.
 
I like the second one the best- nice shots!
 
Perspective looks off... either due to lens choice, or (probably) the keystone corrections you did... they all look like they are leaning different directions. If you are charging for these... rent a tilt/shift and reshoot.
 
Bob,

I think these are too low in the frame and there should be a bit more in the foreground.

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OP- Can you clone out the power lines?
 

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