CC on girl in sunset B&W

[reissigree]

What do you guys think?

DSC_0191_tonemapped by reissigree, on Flickr

 

[raphaelaaron]

i'd suggest not putting the subject right in the center for this shot. it seems like the image is split between peering down the bridge, or viewing off into the water. the rule of thirds, no matter how much it's played out still does wonders for the human mind.

besides the post work, also focus on getting level with the model, not leaving so much head room above her. and another thing i would add would be to get in closer, and get more separation from the background, because my eyes keep drifting to the trees around her head.

i do like the pose; it keeps the viewer guessing about what she may be thinking.

 

[reissigree]

This was one of the first pictures I ever shot lol. But I should've cropped it still. I looked at the EXIF data and It showed I was zoomed all the way in when I should have zoomed all the way out and lowered the stop. But thanks, I agree!