molested_cow said:The subject tends to be in the center of the photo. Maybe you can try to think about the overall composition instead of just focusing on the subject.
LaFoto said:I like her expression best in Photo 2, though - like Mentos here - I am not too happy with your desaturating the photo so much. Plus I would probably choose a different crop, so the girl is not quite so much in the middle of your frame, but more coming from the left and moving into the frame. Do you understand?
You could therefore crop off a bit of sky and some of the left part of the photo.