Decided to play with this shot with a program like photoshop, only dumbed down so i can use it! Enjoy!
I'm all for abstract, if that's what you could consider this, but i like the before version on it's own...you get my kudos however!
i like your before version a lot better.... all that thing did is bump up the contrast...............get a trial version of PS, if you like it im sure you can find a student willing to let you use their discount to get it ....
Sorry but the original dosn't really have much going for it. There is no real subject, it's tilted, it lacks contrast and saturation and the bottom of the scene is cut off.