Commuter train

[kinghen]

A random shot of a commuter train in Chicago, Il. All C&C welcome.
Thanks for looking.
Henry

 

[KenC]

Not a bad train shot. Looks like it needs a little boost in contrast and sharpness. I would also crop the top - there's too much of that building, which dilutes the effect of the tracks/train.

 

[Frequency]

Enhancing contrast would give a better punch. The image is full of horizontal, vertical and slanted lines; If looked upon that way, it seems interesting

 

[kinghen]

Here is an update cropped and the contrast has been brought up.
Henry

 

[KenC]

Yeah, I think that works better.

 

[kinghen]

I like this one better also! Thanks for the tip.
Henry

 

[Frequency]

Doubtless, this is what it really is :thumbsup:

 

[digital flower]

The edit is much better :thumbup: