Interesting. I like the concept. The big change I would make is to fill in the large white areas with crayons, have the white show through in smaller amounts like the bottom. This would also be an interesting selective coloring subject.
always lovely to shoot
and you can never worry about the color
very crisp shot but the minor is the white glow thingy
maybe you should've used a non transparent background and a light that comes from the left side and throws some shadows..but that's my opinion