critique please

[Mike888]

nevermind, sorry

 

[2Stupid2Duck]

Um... okay. I think the post is a little short. Also, you should have used a full stop between the nevermind and the sorry.

Apart from that, nice, brief and to the point.

 

[SirvoN]

I think "n" should be capitalized. Also there should be a period at the end of the sentence. But I think the placement of the comma really makes the post (rule of thirds).

 

[jadin]

If you add some contrast I think it'd really help.

 

[LaFoto]

You're all too funny

But to add some critique to this post:

I had always thought that "Never mind" was two words...

 

[captain-spanky]

i always thought 'Nevermind' was Nirvana not sorry?

 

[Luminosity]

:lmao:

 

[Corry]

Um... okay. I think the post is a little short. Also, you should have used a full stop between the nevermind and the sorry.

Apart from that, nice, brief and to the point.

Ya know...I'm noticing you are just a tad bit odd. You fit so well here!

 

[2Stupid2Duck]

Why thank you.

 

[Osmer_Toby]

i think the color version would be better.

 

[Machine May]

Awesome album! I LOVE Nirvana...

 

[Mike888]

im so very confused. lol :shock:

 

[Karalee]

Oh man, you guys are terrible. Is it Confuse the Newbie week? Wheres the memo?

 

[bshearer]

Oh man, you guys are terrible. Is it Confuse the Newbie week? Wheres the memo?

If you would of filled out your TPS reports you would of gotten the memo.

 

[Heather]

I think you did a great job! However, I think it would have been more effective if you had added some punch. Increase the saturation to "Never mind! Sorry!"