Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Mike888, Sep 30, 2004.
Um... okay. I think the post is a little short. Also, you should have used a full stop between the nevermind and the sorry.
Apart from that, nice, brief and to the point.
I think "n" should be capitalized. Also there should be a period at the end of the sentence. But I think the placement of the comma really makes the post (rule of thirds).
If you add some contrast I think it'd really help.
You're all too funny
But to add some critique to this post:
I had always thought that "Never mind" was two words...
i always thought 'Nevermind' was Nirvana not sorry?
Ya know...I'm noticing you are just a tad bit odd. You fit so well here!
Why thank you.
i think the color version would be better.
Awesome album! I LOVE Nirvana...
im so very confused. lol :shock:
Separate names with a comma.