critique pls

[asr84]

I personally like this photo but I'm not happy with the lighting results... anyone got any idea?

 

[newrmdmike]

i want it to be significantly brighter in the window or whatever that is.

if you can't get it quite there you might could get away with it as a bw image with a little more noise

 

[just x joey]

i agree, you should get more light from the window, less from the street light. and straighted it up, maybe use a tripod and hold the exposure open longer to get it to look like the peiople are movine? i dunno... jsut a thought

 

[asr84]

Yes, I think that would work nice. It's the entrance of a pub actually. Gonna try it out, thx