Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by elsaspet, Aug 10, 2005.
Weird crop, I know, but I'm wondering if this works at all. Thanks for looking.
Just....show me all of the eye on the right, and I think you'll have a winner. :thumbup: I like these tight crops.
I agree with Terri. Include the right eye (his left) and you'll have a great shot! The dof is great, but maybe a teensie tiny bit shallow. I just wish I could figure out what the people in the background are doing a bit better.
i would say either all the all eye on the right or crop it enough so you don't see any of the right. agree with meysh that maybe a bit less dof in background would work, doesn't have to be razor sharp, just enough to add an interesting 'element' to the story.
oh, I dunno... I must be odd-man-out. I like the one and a half eye thing.
i see what vonnagy is saying but i tend to agree with Christie Photo. interesting comp Cindy...was this intentional?
whew... i was glad to ready christie photos comments, and jon mikal... puts me in great company.. i like it... all of it...just like that...
but then again, elsaspet.... you may wanna remember who this comment is from...
ms. out there lookin' in.....way out there lookin' in!!
i like it...great shot...
I like the half an eye. I even like the dof, I think more detail would pull your attention away from the eye and a half.
I'd quite like the guy to close his mouth though, not that that's got anything to do with the compostion as such!
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