crypt *takes deep breath*

[lilithvalentine]

Okay *takes deep breath and jumps in with both feet* here goes my first ever piece of work submitted to this forum for critique lol. This was taken as part of an assignment for my photography class in high school a few years back. But i can't decide which version looks better.... (feel free to edit it and have a play with it if anyone wishes).

 

[ShutteredEye]

I like the perspective and the composition. Cool subject too. Wish the lensflare didn't cover up the relief on the front though....I like the second version better of the two.

 

[JohnMF]

I think it has a nice composition, its a shame the first has blow out on the sky. The second one is better but the building looks a little under exposed maybe.

This could be my new monitor though, im still messing about with it trying the get the calibration right on it. So i apoligise if ive got the exposure comments wrong!

 

[tr0gd0o0r]

I prefer a combined version of the two. I like having the detail in the ground, but like the sky. I'd suggest burning the sky/ top of building in (assuming you're doing it in the darkroom). In PS i'd just copy and past the part you wanted.

 

[lilithvalentine]

awesome thanks all i'll have a play round with the computer tonight and see if i can find a balance.

lol its not as scary as i thought it would be

 

[ksmattfish]

I like the second version. The top third of the image needs some burning. Maybe the lower corners too.