Deserted

I. Love. This. Perhaps it will be flamed, but damn. I took it, and it just struck a chord in me. I was really excited to show all of you.

Lemme know what you think. Be easy please Critique is good, but be gentle

 

Maybe this is the wrong forum or something.... should i post this in another section?

 

I think you should not have cropped the top of the building off. Other than that..not oo bad, cool capture.

 

I really like it too, nice shot.

 

The building is cool and the tones are nice. I agree about the top of the building. The whole image seems a little soft too.

 

I like the softness of the building, but the top should be there.

On a different note. Where is this building? I hate to see the really cool past structures just wasting away. Seems a waste.

 

if you could retake this, include the entire roof top and position the guy a little closer to the camera...he's a bit of a distraction at this distance IMO.

i like the feel of this and believe it's definitely worth a reshoot. :thumbup:

 

It's in Waco Texas I agree with all of you about the top. Damn. OH well

As for the softness, I'm a big fan of the tones in this one. Usually i go way overboard with contrast, but I kept it softer on this and I like it.

Thanks for the feedback so far!

 

I like the tone and I don't mind the "softness". My only complaint is the top of the building but I guess you realize that by now, eh? Really nice shot though... and welcome to the forum.

 

I strongly agree on him..

it will look more impressive if the top of the building was not crapted..

but...awesome pic..i like it..B/W

 

Thanks. I already acknowledged the top part Glad you like it.