did I edit this correctly?

cactus waltz

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original:

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my edit:

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I think both look good, I just wonder if there's anything you would have done differently.
 
I prefer the first one.
The large amount of sky balances well with the silhouette of the building - and all that space counterpoints the bird on the edge. Birds are creatures of the sky so it is only right they contemplate a lot of it.
The second one feels 'tight' and confined which I don't believe is the right mood.
Maybe push up the levels or contrast a gnats on the first to get rid of the hint of window - like you have in the second.
The first one also makes you work a bit harder to figure out what it is all about so that when you see the bird it has more impact.
 
I see what you mean, Hertz. I was in the same line of thinking myself.

I take it this is the sort of improvement I should have:

fgelsiluettb8de.jpg



Ernie, I'm afraid there isn't much detail to be had, it's a pitch black silhuetto to begin with.
 

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