Ducati Model, possible NSFW?

[Muay_Thai_Dan]

Over exposed and the angles could be a bit more varied. You were exposing for the background and the camera overshot. You should have used spot-metering, metered for her face, locked in the metering and then got a lot closer with the camera to fill a bit more of the frame with the bike.

The shots from the rear have the distracting pole in the place... not good, but nothing you could do about that short of repositioning.

How about a more aggressive angle down close to the ground or camera above head?

Jerry, thanks a lot for the suggestions & angle ideas. i will work on everything you mentioned. exposure, angles, /better composition.:thumbup:

really appreciate your C&C thanks !

keep it coming if there is anything else anyone!

 

[GeneralBenson]

Long lens, big aperture, off camera flash, drop the ambient 3 stops, bring up the model with flash that is close to her, voila. You've got yourself a nice pictures with the model/bike in focus, tightly cropped and well lit, and the background/distracting elements out of focus and darker.

 

[anubis404]

Background is very distracting, and face is overexposed. Use a wide aperture or photoshop to fix the background, and maybe use bounced flash to get the face rights. You also might want to crop some of the foreground.